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Making Up For Lost Time And Broken Promises...
Well, I've made some teeeny tiny edits on the first three chapters and fixed the word "party" in the seventh chapter. Helps to go back and at least skim what you've got. I'm still working on chapter eight...I've started it three times now. I think I like the beginning of this last one the best.

Thanks for the points so far Dave! You're my hero.